aldrichlim
07-18-2007, 09:35 PM
We have an exercise (themed "Water") in Benildean Press Corps (our school's press group). Here are my outputs:) Comments and suggestions are welcome! Enjoy!
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View Full Version : S P L A S H aldrichlim 07-18-2007, 09:35 PM We have an exercise (themed "Water") in Benildean Press Corps (our school's press group). Here are my outputs:) Comments and suggestions are welcome! Enjoy! aldrichlim 07-18-2007, 09:36 PM Camera model: Canon EOS 400D DIGITAL Flash used: Yes (manual) Focal length: 49.0mm (35mm equivalent: 110mm) Exposure time: 0.017 s (1/60) Aperture: f/5.6 ISO equiv.: 400 Exposure: Manualhttp://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t92/aldrichl6/water1.jpg aldrichlim 07-18-2007, 09:37 PM Camera model: Canon EOS 400D DIGITAL Flash used: Yes (manual) Focal length: 49.0mm (35mm equivalent: 96mm) Exposure time: 0.017 s (1/60) Aperture: f/5.6 ISO equiv.: 400 Metering Mode: matrix Exposure: Manualhttp://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t92/aldrichl6/water2.jpg Erwin Feliciano 07-18-2007, 09:49 PM Aldrich, in my opinion, concept-wise, I think your shots are pretty straightforward -- there is nothing else in each frame but a squirt of water, so I am not sure if it'd work with the editor. When I read your introduction, there were several thoughts that came in mind, mostly metaphoric in nature. Then again, I might have been going overboard. Technicality, I dunno, I am no expert when it comes to that. The first pic, though, could perhaps do away with the haze or smoke at the top left corner. I leave the more experienced ones to add their thoughts. :) aldrichlim 07-18-2007, 09:55 PM Aldrich, in my opinion, concept-wise, I think your shots are pretty straightforward -- there is nothing else in each frame but a squirt of water, so I am not sure if it'd work with the editor. When I read your introduction, there were several thoughts that came in mind, mostly metaphoric in nature. Then again, I might have been going overboard. Technicality, I dunno, I am no expert when it comes to that. The first pic, though, could perhaps do away with the haze or smoke at the top left corner. I leave the more experienced ones to add their thoughts. :) ohh yeah. I didn't notice that :D the plastic cover covering my monitor is making some annoying glare:) thanks for the comments bro! aldrichlim 07-18-2007, 09:57 PM Camera model: Canon EOS 400D DIGITAL Flash used: Yes (manual) Focal length: 55.0mm (35mm equivalent: 89mm) Exposure time: 0.017 s (1/60) Aperture: f/5.6 ISO equiv.: 400 Metering Mode: matrix Exposure: Manualhttp://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t92/aldrichl6/water3.jpg aldrichlim 07-18-2007, 09:58 PM Camera model: Canon EOS 400D DIGITAL Flash used: Yes (manual) Focal length: 37.0mm (35mm equivalent: 78mm) Exposure time: 0.0100 s (1/100) Aperture: f/8.0 ISO equiv.: 400 Metering Mode: matrix Exposure: Manualhttp://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t92/aldrichl6/water4.jpg aldrichlim 07-18-2007, 09:59 PM Camera model: Canon EOS 400D DIGITAL Flash used: Yes (manual) Focal length: 28.0mm (35mm equivalent: 45mm) Exposure time: 0.0100 s (1/100) Aperture: f/8.0 ISO equiv.: 400 Metering Mode: matrix Exposure: Manualhttp://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t92/aldrichl6/water5.jpg ArthurLegardo 07-18-2007, 10:05 PM Exceptional work! The second one is quite interesting. How did you get it to bend like that? (without a point of reference it's difficult to tell). My only suggestion would be to even out the background of the first photo - the top left corner is not completely black. carlo cabral 07-18-2007, 10:09 PM eto pla ung cnasabi mo sakin.. good job.. :) u cud have added some "paarte" just like erwin said.. for more impact :) pero its interesting na.. nevertheless aldrichlim 07-18-2007, 10:09 PM Exceptional work! The second one is quite interesting. How did you get it to bend like that? (without a point of reference it's difficult to tell). My only suggestion would be to even out the background of the first photo - the top left corner is not completely black. Thanks Arthur! It just came out like that:) I wasn't able to notice the upper left portion of the first image cause my monitor's plastic is still on and its creating this annoying glare :RedEye: hehe..maybe within this month I will be removing that plastic:D aldrichlim 07-18-2007, 10:12 PM eto pla ung cnasabi mo sakin.. good job.. :) u cud have added some "paarte" just like erwin said.. for more impact :) pero its interesting na.. nevertheless ya..hehe. thats it! I think it would be better if i used my external flash. I wasn't able to find it so I just used the built-in flash:) sayang JonDexterTan 07-18-2007, 10:23 PM you used your built-in flash for those shots? fantastic! :D carlo cabral 07-18-2007, 10:34 PM are u just using black cardboard for your background? how about any continuous light? aldrichlim 07-20-2007, 04:34 AM you used your built-in flash for those shots? fantastic! :D yup! and i also placed a small white plastic on it as a diffuser :) aldrichlim 07-20-2007, 04:34 AM are u just using black cardboard for your background? how about any continuous light? Black cartolina. Just the built-in flash and some pp in Photoshop:) Ronald Suello 11-12-2007, 01:53 PM Makisingit ho sa Splash thread dito... http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2404/1974773056_4b6dbd8624.jpg Exposure: 1/250 sec Aperture: f/8 Focal Length: 125 mm ISO Speed: 200 danpagulayan 11-12-2007, 09:03 PM I'm enjoying this thread and this other very similar one: http://digitalphotographer.com.ph/forum/showthread.php?goto=newpost&t=6520 Any chance of merging the two? I would like to be able to monitor these two, without having to navigate the DPP universe. Erwin B. Mallari 11-13-2007, 02:28 PM here's my share http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p103/gamepencil/domino.jpg |