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aldrichlim
07-18-2007, 09:35 PM
We have an exercise (themed "Water") in Benildean Press Corps (our school's press group). Here are my outputs:) Comments and suggestions are welcome! Enjoy!

aldrichlim
07-18-2007, 09:36 PM
Camera model: Canon EOS 400D DIGITAL
Flash used: Yes (manual)
Focal length: 49.0mm (35mm equivalent: 110mm)
Exposure time: 0.017 s (1/60)
Aperture: f/5.6
ISO equiv.: 400
Exposure: Manualhttp://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t92/aldrichl6/water1.jpg

aldrichlim
07-18-2007, 09:37 PM
Camera model: Canon EOS 400D DIGITAL
Flash used: Yes (manual)
Focal length: 49.0mm (35mm equivalent: 96mm)
Exposure time: 0.017 s (1/60)
Aperture: f/5.6
ISO equiv.: 400
Metering Mode: matrix
Exposure: Manualhttp://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t92/aldrichl6/water2.jpg

Erwin Feliciano
07-18-2007, 09:49 PM
Aldrich, in my opinion, concept-wise, I think your shots are pretty straightforward -- there is nothing else in each frame but a squirt of water, so I am not sure if it'd work with the editor.

When I read your introduction, there were several thoughts that came in mind, mostly metaphoric in nature. Then again, I might have been going overboard.

Technicality, I dunno, I am no expert when it comes to that. The first pic, though, could perhaps do away with the haze or smoke at the top left corner. I leave the more experienced ones to add their thoughts. :)

aldrichlim
07-18-2007, 09:55 PM
Aldrich, in my opinion, concept-wise, I think your shots are pretty straightforward -- there is nothing else in each frame but a squirt of water, so I am not sure if it'd work with the editor.

When I read your introduction, there were several thoughts that came in mind, mostly metaphoric in nature. Then again, I might have been going overboard.

Technicality, I dunno, I am no expert when it comes to that. The first pic, though, could perhaps do away with the haze or smoke at the top left corner. I leave the more experienced ones to add their thoughts. :)
ohh yeah. I didn't notice that :D the plastic cover covering my monitor is making some annoying glare:) thanks for the comments bro!

aldrichlim
07-18-2007, 09:57 PM
Camera model: Canon EOS 400D DIGITAL
Flash used: Yes (manual)
Focal length: 55.0mm (35mm equivalent: 89mm)
Exposure time: 0.017 s (1/60)
Aperture: f/5.6
ISO equiv.: 400
Metering Mode: matrix
Exposure: Manualhttp://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t92/aldrichl6/water3.jpg

aldrichlim
07-18-2007, 09:58 PM
Camera model: Canon EOS 400D DIGITAL
Flash used: Yes (manual)
Focal length: 37.0mm (35mm equivalent: 78mm)
Exposure time: 0.0100 s (1/100)
Aperture: f/8.0
ISO equiv.: 400
Metering Mode: matrix
Exposure: Manualhttp://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t92/aldrichl6/water4.jpg

aldrichlim
07-18-2007, 09:59 PM
Camera model: Canon EOS 400D DIGITAL
Flash used: Yes (manual)
Focal length: 28.0mm (35mm equivalent: 45mm)
Exposure time: 0.0100 s (1/100)
Aperture: f/8.0
ISO equiv.: 400
Metering Mode: matrix
Exposure: Manualhttp://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t92/aldrichl6/water5.jpg

ArthurLegardo
07-18-2007, 10:05 PM
Exceptional work! The second one is quite interesting. How did you get it to bend like that? (without a point of reference it's difficult to tell). My only suggestion would be to even out the background of the first photo - the top left corner is not completely black.

carlo cabral
07-18-2007, 10:09 PM
eto pla ung cnasabi mo sakin.. good job.. :) u cud have added some "paarte" just like erwin said.. for more impact :) pero its interesting na.. nevertheless

aldrichlim
07-18-2007, 10:09 PM
Exceptional work! The second one is quite interesting. How did you get it to bend like that? (without a point of reference it's difficult to tell). My only suggestion would be to even out the background of the first photo - the top left corner is not completely black.
Thanks Arthur! It just came out like that:) I wasn't able to notice the upper left portion of the first image cause my monitor's plastic is still on and its creating this annoying glare :RedEye: hehe..maybe within this month I will be removing that plastic:D

aldrichlim
07-18-2007, 10:12 PM
eto pla ung cnasabi mo sakin.. good job.. :) u cud have added some "paarte" just like erwin said.. for more impact :) pero its interesting na.. nevertheless

ya..hehe. thats it! I think it would be better if i used my external flash. I wasn't able to find it so I just used the built-in flash:) sayang

JonDexterTan
07-18-2007, 10:23 PM
you used your built-in flash for those shots? fantastic! :D

carlo cabral
07-18-2007, 10:34 PM
are u just using black cardboard for your background? how about any continuous light?

aldrichlim
07-20-2007, 04:34 AM
you used your built-in flash for those shots? fantastic! :D
yup! and i also placed a small white plastic on it as a diffuser :)

aldrichlim
07-20-2007, 04:34 AM
are u just using black cardboard for your background? how about any continuous light?
Black cartolina. Just the built-in flash and some pp in Photoshop:)

Ronald Suello
11-12-2007, 01:53 PM
Makisingit ho sa Splash thread dito...

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2404/1974773056_4b6dbd8624.jpg

Exposure: 1/250 sec
Aperture: f/8
Focal Length: 125 mm
ISO Speed: 200

danpagulayan
11-12-2007, 09:03 PM
I'm enjoying this thread and this other very similar one: http://digitalphotographer.com.ph/forum/showthread.php?goto=newpost&t=6520

Any chance of merging the two? I would like to be able to monitor these two, without having to navigate the DPP universe.

Erwin B. Mallari
11-13-2007, 02:28 PM
here's my share
http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p103/gamepencil/domino.jpg