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View Full Version : 1st post po.. sherobeleconcepcion 11-23-2006, 11:21 AM Hi. newbie .Try Lang rin po. from my latest shoot. I would love some critique and ideas for improvement please... http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v247/sherobele/IMG_6551.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v247/sherobele/IMG_6506.jpg allan_florendo 11-23-2006, 11:38 AM NIce shots! Like the depth of field in the 2nd image. Nice expression also of the kid! Good work! keep it up! Mon Corpuz 11-23-2006, 11:49 AM just love those bokeh! more! more! MelvinSevilla 11-23-2006, 11:56 AM Great shots! I really love it! Btw, Welcome to DPP! :) Dys Santos 11-23-2006, 12:02 PM The second picture seems blurred. The font used in "PROOF" looks like the Puma font. zandy_marantal 11-23-2006, 12:30 PM Welcome to DPP Sherobele! Great 1st post. Keep em coming.. :) Princess Jarlyn Young 11-23-2006, 12:39 PM hi ms. concepcion, welcome to DPP! nice shots! i like what you did with the 2nd shot.. the kid popped out of the picture. :) love the colors as well.. nice job!~ Louieescobar 11-23-2006, 12:43 PM Warm welcome to you sherobeleconcepcion! Nice pics you got there. Post some more. cris_servillas 11-23-2006, 01:23 PM hi she, welcome to the site! Nino Estrada 11-26-2006, 01:04 AM cute kid, and nice family pic. i really love outdoor picture, makes it feel more natural, nice work on the DOF. Earl Gonzalez 11-26-2006, 08:23 AM Hi Sherobele! :Grin: Welcome to DPP! :) mmmmmmm... The images looks fine to me, except that in the first image, the mother and the child she's holding, seems to be looking at something else... :) HTH. regie_de_rueda 11-26-2006, 09:40 AM Welcome! Nice subject. Since you asked for it.....A simple copyright symbol will suffice (place it on the lower right/left corner), I find it distracting to see your 'proof' symbol right in the middle of the picture you want us to critique.If you're afraid that someone's gonna steal your work, placing a big 'proof' text on your image won't prevent them from doing so. Next time, keep an eye on your subject's background, the steel railing behind your subject's head is also distracting. It looks like your subject has been shot by an oversized arrow right through the head. It's similar to avoiding tree branches/electrical post getting in the picture behind your subject's head, because it will look like the tree branches are growing out of their head. For my taste, a tighter crop would have also helped the composition on your first image. I would also clone/remove the stray branch on the left side and the structure on the right side. Keep shooting! Reyno Rosete 11-26-2006, 11:46 AM Very nice captures for a first and cute little ones too. Welcome to the forum Sherobele. Looking forward to more of your posts. Enjoy and happy shooting. sherobeleconcepcion 11-28-2006, 05:58 PM Wow! Thanks for all your comments and suggestions. ... Thanks for being rude! heheheh.. :) |