melmiranda
04-27-2008, 09:05 PM
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View Full Version : C&C Mga Dahon melmiranda 04-27-2008, 09:05 PM http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2003/2445737848_f2a730cf75_o.jpg RameloGusilatar 04-27-2008, 10:31 PM Cool, another version would probably focus on the falling leaves :) TFS! melmiranda 04-28-2008, 08:34 AM Thanks Ramelo! David Tong 04-28-2008, 08:46 AM The shot was well executed, but I'll try to improve with the following: 1) Different subject or change the subject's clothes. His outfit doesn't lend to the idea of tossing leaves. 2) Change location. The L300, the houses, etc. competes with the scene and doesn't fit the leaf-throwing concept. 3) Ditch the cellphone. 4) Try a different vantage point so that his hands are included. melmiranda 04-28-2008, 10:46 AM David, Thanks for the very great comments! I feel blessed with you comments, i believe this will make my next photos better. God bless. melmiranda 04-29-2008, 05:34 PM Permit me not to create another thread, Let me share another photo that i took on the wedding of our friends. you can freely give your comments and critques "Flower Girls" http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3127/2451758988_11449f3f48_o.jpg "Paru-paro" http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2333/2450933421_788c5ac73b_o.jpg Thanks in advance! David Tong 04-29-2008, 05:43 PM The butterfly shot is so nice :D Maybe you can desaturate the dress a little? The green seems clipped... Marvin Uy 04-29-2008, 09:03 PM I like the butterfly shot! al coroza 04-29-2008, 10:02 PM the butterfly shot is awesome. nice lighting too |