mike buenaflor
04-19-2008, 06:16 PM
Hi Guys, Here to Share my first Bikini shoot.
Please C&C is greatly appreciated..
1.) Wating for the Bus....
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2178/2425150936_c91fef49ff.jpg
2.) Are your Mad?
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2064/2425169464_ff4478398f.jpg
3.) Just Playing around with Monochome RAW file.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3047/2425185098_07fef44368.jpg
Thanks!! Enjoy...
Tok Paler
04-19-2008, 06:35 PM
just curious...
your name appears to be mike buenaflor but the signature reads keith2008photography...
mike buenaflor
04-19-2008, 06:48 PM
HI Tok, Keith Coz most of my Friends that ask for there picture know me as Keith.
"Screen Name" :D
Arnell Umali
04-20-2008, 10:42 AM
Not exactly sure what you wanted to achieve but if there were "fantasy" shots, you would have to demonstrate more creativity, i.e., more thinking.
riancastillo
04-20-2008, 12:22 PM
nice reflection on the first...
the pink sweater on the second is distracting.. better if she took it off.. :Grin:
third looks blown out..
leon_monleon
04-23-2008, 05:11 PM
I don't like the pose of the blond lady,it made her tummy prominent
the second girl is ok
the third girl looks very stiff
Marty Enrile
04-24-2008, 07:15 PM
The white bikini on caucasian skin makes for weak contrast to accentuate her curves, which is why it was a bikini shoot at first - i presume. I do like the use of the reflection on the glass which provides an intresting counterpoint.
ron concepcion
05-13-2008, 10:19 AM
1st: overexposed to my liking...
2nd: (middle) not bad... keep at it.
3rd: (top) zoom out, more model needed. less bus in the photo.
nice captures overall. just keep at it.
keep posting bikini shots, they are really appreciated by all!!!
:):):)
abumagbanua
05-13-2008, 10:41 AM
i like the reflection on the first picture. but i think it'd be better if you included more of her legs - framed it a little more to the left.
Jared Gomez
05-13-2008, 07:37 PM
i don't like the fact that you cut the models' legs on image 1 & 2. the low point of view or angle of shooting on image 1 made the girls bottom look not proportioned. i find the title on image 2 a little misleading. she doesn't look mad at all. she looked as if she was seducing, also considering how she handled the sweater. composition-wise, i think image 3 is the best. the models' poses aren't working. you as a photographer should direct the scene and tell her what and what not to do (in a kind and friendly way though). it is your job to show the emotion of the model or the scene with your pictures.