1.) Lovely
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2277/2349210953_94a67dfe8f.jpg

2.)WAllpaper edition
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2097/2339754147_a774dd0257.jpg

3.)Hot Cow Girl
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2326/2341332456_cc2cfed5a2.jpg

4).Wild Wild West
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2219/2339755087_59fb9e3a58.jpg

5.) OMG
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2236/2339756311_e0fc1f421d.jpg

Thanks

Not bad! The quality of your photos are ace. (:

I like the choice of outfits & background, they really go well together. (:

Keep shooting!

@ Tracy Thanks... She is my Officemate, and he jst invited me to shoot her hehehe
Coz she knew that i just bought my SLR last march only hehehe still very newbies...

@ Tracy Thanks... She is my Officemate, and he jst invited me to shoot her hehehe
Coz she knew that i just bought my SLR last march only hehehe still very newbies...

Impressive! Your first shoot was great, then. (: You capture photos well. Good job ^^

your first shoot and already exemplary :)

im waiting till your next shoot. tfs

@ Tracy Really thanks ... maybe because for the camera.. hehe I'll try more .. and post more .. with different workflow.. i'm now on experementing stage of RAW images... hehe

@noeletomalabcad Thanks... hope to share more pohots ... as soon i find next gunie pig hehehe :Grin:

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2277/2349210953_94a67dfe8f.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2097/2339754147_a774dd0257.jpg

I find the cropping on the torso off... better if you gave a bit more on this one. The pose and the expression are too contrived for my taste. It seems like she just stood there and posed, without really making good use of the background (which is nice actually). No difference in impact if this was shot against a white wall. The arm just looks dead stiff. This is the kind of shot where lighting could be done in two ways: naturally blending or stylized. Unfortunately, this attempt was neither. It's a half-baked approach.

Looks like a fill flash was fired on the face, which I think flattened the shot. Would've had more depth if the flash was coming from an upper portion of the image, replicating the source of the natural light. If you're going to for the stylized look, then more lights would be needed to give the highlights, etc...

I would've looked for a more dynamic pose, situation and make use of the perspective the corridor gave.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2326/2341332456_cc2cfed5a2.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2219/2339755087_59fb9e3a58.jpg

If you're changing concept, I would suggest also changing the make-up. The make-up on her is not apt for the styling. The wardrobe also doesn't match the background where she's in. The pose and expression is again too contrived, almost bordering on tacky.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2236/2339756311_e0fc1f421d.jpg

Overall, I didn't see any binding concept / element that made sense in any of the shots. The concept / styling / situation are all off-tangent with each other.

Just my two cents. Nothing personal.

@Jason Thanks for the comment ... very informative... its my pleasure to hear those comments from you .... i'll try to make it more dynamic , sylistic , conceptualized next time.. :Grin:

Sharp pictures...

I think i know your model....and i don't remember that you use a fill flash for the #1 pic...:Grin:

@ jay .. waahhhh surely you know well the model .... yah maybe you dont remember me using flash that time coz your also doing your shots... hehehe :Grin: