hi guys,

i am fetching for comments and suggestions for further improvement... kindly critique..

thanks heaps :)

good day!



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Your last photo - I like the blues very much in this photo! Do you have a filter attached to your lens?

Your last photo - I like the blues very much in this photo! Do you have a filter attached to your lens?


just a UV filter.. no other filters... tnx, tracy!
how can i improve my shots, any suggestions?:)

I like the Jesus Christ statue shot. The halo effect is nice! Where is this btw? :)

I prefer though if you can tilt it a bit more to the right so that the cross/crucifix figure is more pronounced.

Have you also tried the same shot without the UV filter?

just a UV filter.. no other filters... tnx, tracy!
how can i improve my shots, any suggestions?:)

Hmm. Well, for your first photo, I think the girl needs something to look at. Try and anticipate when the fish are going to swim into view. (:

For your second photo, maybe you could crop a tiiiiny tiny tiny portion out from the bottom, because I see little bits of red and I don't know what they are. And since warm colors usually advance and cool colors recede, they can be a bit distracting. Well, for me. ^^;

Your last photo is excellent, though maybe you could change your angle a tiny bit so we can see the face of Jesus better? I dunno. XD

There you go, my 2 cents. ^^

I like the Jesus Christ statue shot. The halo effect is nice! Where is this btw? :)

I prefer though if you can tilt it a bit more to the right so that the cross/crucifix figure is more pronounced.

Have you also tried the same shot without the UV filter?

it's in monasterio de tarlac, a monastery here in tarlac that houses a part of the true cross of Jesus Christ... IT's really a place for peace.

refer to this link for more photos of the monastery: http://twistedmosaic.multiply.com/photos/album/44/MONASTERIO

Nope, i didn't try it without the UV filter. I'll do what you suggested the next time I go there. thank you, john!:)

Hmm. Well, for your first photo, I think the girl needs something to look at. Try and anticipate when the fish are going to swim into view. (:

For your second photo, maybe you could crop a tiiiiny tiny tiny portion out from the bottom, because I see little bits of red and I don't know what they are. And since warm colors usually advance and cool colors recede, they can be a bit distracting. Well, for me. ^^;

Your last photo is excellent, though maybe you could change your angle a tiny bit so we can see the face of Jesus better? I dunno. XD

There you go, my 2 cents. ^^

thank you for taking the time in critiquing my shots, i'll try my luck with the fishes next time :) my timing under this condition needs improvement.. 2nd, i'll do what u said for the next photo... my bad. :Grin: and i'll also do the same for the last photo.

your comments are indeed helpful! :)

thank you again, ms tracy.