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jivajimenez
03-16-2008, 12:37 PM
i know im not good enough hope u like it...http://digitalphotographer.com.ph/forum/images/smilies/Drogar-BigGrin%28DBG%29.gif
hope u coment or critics my work....tnx...http://digitalphotographer.com.ph/forum/images/smilies/Drogar-Happy%28DBG%29.gif


http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/dd152/jivajimenez/d3-1.jpg

http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/dd152/jivajimenez/21-4.jpg

http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/dd152/jivajimenez/d1-1.jpg

Reyno Rosete
03-17-2008, 03:07 AM
May I suggest you post one photo at a time to critique and tell us what you want to achieve with your photo.

ryan_saldua
03-17-2008, 04:58 PM
I agree... ~_~

erwinjasonmendoza
03-17-2008, 06:52 PM
whats the concept here?
pic # 3: distracting green gaisano(?) plastic bag :)
btw, nice truck! i want ur truck! :) hehe

jivajimenez
03-17-2008, 07:26 PM
ok sir thanks next time po...:)

May I suggest you post one photo at a time to critique and tell us what you want to achieve with your photo.

jivajimenez
03-17-2008, 07:31 PM
tnx sir i learned a lot from u..tnx sir..:)

whats the concept here?
pic # 3: distracting green gaisano(?) plastic bag :)
btw, nice truck! i want ur truck! :) hehe

ArthurLegardo
03-17-2008, 08:47 PM
The tones and the colour palatte are very nice. Personally, I think you can do without the backlight in the first and second photos, or at least, improve on its placement. I would have also liked to have seen more natural poses by your model and a different facial expression.

RameloGusilatar
03-18-2008, 06:17 PM
More relaxed poses for your model would probably be a good variation. I like the truck and the lighting. Is that styro and yellow plastic intentional? Would it be better if they are not there? Keep shooting : )

jivajimenez
03-22-2008, 03:54 PM
tnx po sir iv learn alot from u sir....thanks so much...:)



The tones and the colour palatte are very nice. Personally, I think you can do without the backlight in the first and second photos, or at least, improve on its placement. I would have also liked to have seen more natural poses by your model and a different facial expression.

jivajimenez
03-22-2008, 03:56 PM
thanks for the coment sir....didn't see that sir...thanks again sir...:Grin::)


More relaxed poses for your model would probably be a good variation. I like the truck and the lighting. Is that styro and yellow plastic intentional? Would it be better if they are not there? Keep shooting : )