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Jan Michael Oyales
03-13-2008, 05:06 AM
went with my friends to UP diliman to take some pictures.. :)

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Aly_Reyes
03-13-2008, 05:49 AM
Hey, its my alma mater.

Hi, Jan. Welcome to the Critique Gallery!!!

If I may put my C&C for the first picture:
- the football player's head is chopped off. Perhaps composition wise you should have lessened the lower portion and increased the top portion.
-I don't see the relevance of having the socks and the ball's colors. Is there?
-The picture is a bit grainy.

danpagulayan
03-13-2008, 06:05 AM
UP Diliman, my backyard EB venue.

Have the sunflowers been planted along University Avenue already? When they're in bloom, it would be nice to have an EB there.

Henry_Anima_II
03-13-2008, 07:49 AM
I used to stay at one of the teacher's houses their... we just had a photoshoot there last sunday...

I agree with sir aly that you should adjust the framing to prevent a portion of your subject's head from being chopped... the third photo is a fav amongst three...

RameloGusilatar
03-13-2008, 01:11 PM
I like the third shot ... it reminds me of usual travel along that highway ... waiting for a few more minutes would make this interesting as well. The second shot, I like the colors, did you use PP? The first one .. yep, not all wants their head chopped off - even digitally. But I think you were trying your hand here in "color-in-monochrome". Hmmnn .. what would it look like if the grass was the only thing colored? ... well, keep on shooting and sharing : )

Jan Michael Oyales
03-13-2008, 05:56 PM
Hey, its my alma mater.

Hi, Jan. Welcome to the Critique Gallery!!!

If I may put my C&C for the first picture:
- the football player's head is chopped off. Perhaps composition wise you should have lessened the lower portion and increased the top portion.
-I don't see the relevance of having the socks and the ball's colors. Is there?
-The picture is a bit grainy.

Thanks... i will take note of that :)

Jan Michael Oyales
03-13-2008, 05:57 PM
I like the third shot ... it reminds me of usual travel along that highway ... waiting for a few more minutes would make this interesting as well. The second shot, I like the colors, did you use PP? The first one .. yep, not all wants their head chopped off - even digitally. But I think you were trying your hand here in "color-in-monochrome". Hmmnn .. what would it look like if the grass was the only thing colored? ... well, keep on shooting and sharing : )


Sorry i'm just new to this and i am not familiar with the acronyms... :) what's PP?
I will try making the grass colored and everything b&w :)

thanks for your comments :)

erwinjasonmendoza
03-14-2008, 12:18 AM
what's PP?
Post Process :)

Jan Michael Oyales
03-14-2008, 01:07 PM
Post Process :)

ahhhh.. yah i used PP.. :)