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Jerico Umali
02-25-2008, 09:24 AM
Paki critic lang po, thnks

*Using natural light from windows, diffuser, silver reflector, 1pm shooting time, PS level adjustment*

http://caleb.photonski.com/med/tolitz/142045-med-pansit-palabok.jpg

errol_roldan
02-25-2008, 12:47 PM
first of all, it doesnt look like pancit palabok to me. it could use a deeper depth of field. or maybe you could have focused on the shrimps which looks much more interesting than the shredded meat on the middle. another thing that got my attention was how dry everything looks. its not mouth watering. the calamansi tends to grab my attention more than the food itself which means compostionally, its weak.

just my .02 cents worth. :)

boopsiesiapno
02-25-2008, 01:48 PM
it doesnt look tasty. no sheen and shrimps are too red

Jerico Umali
02-25-2008, 02:29 PM
Thank you po sa comments nyo :)..noted po lahat try po ulet ako ng bago hehehe,
salamat po ng marami.

Jared Posion
02-26-2008, 06:49 PM
hi jerico. thanks for sharing man. the tight cropping and lighting is acceptable...though the upper right corner is abit overexposed. you adjusted the red channel much thus affecting the tone of the shrimp, perhaps additional reflector on the lower left can help.

shoot it again and share the latest set!

good start!

Jerico Umali
02-27-2008, 09:04 AM
hi jerico. thanks for sharing man. the tight cropping and lighting is acceptable...though the upper right corner is abit overexposed. you adjusted the red channel much thus affecting the tone of the shrimp, perhaps additional reflector on the lower left can help.

shoot it again and share the latest set!

good start!

Thanks po sa comment sir jared medyo napa sobra nga pag ka edit, shoot po ulet ako ng bago :)..