briancayanan
02-10-2008, 01:22 AM
hi guys! i'm still new to this hobby and i have started a few threads here and there just to get some feedback as to how i'm doing. well so far i haven't got any feedbacks from any of my previous threads, but since i really enjoy photography, this will not let me down.
so here i am, gonna try once again... and even if just one comment comes up in this thread i will be very very happy.
the complete set is available here: http://www.flickr.com/photos/bhry/sets/72157603842719309/
here's my favorite from the set:
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2253/2237657351_1e9ef167db.jpg
rollyescobar
02-10-2008, 01:46 AM
hi guys! i'm still new to this hobby and i have started a few threads here and there just to get some feedback as to how i'm doing. well so far i haven't got any feedbacks from any of my previous threads, but since i really enjoy photography, this will not let me down.
so here i am, gonna try once again... and even if just one comment comes up in this thread i will be very very happy.
the complete set is available here: http://www.flickr.com/photos/bhry/sets/72157603842719309/
here's my favorite from the set:
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2253/2237657351_1e9ef167db.jpg
I am no expert but the way I see the image is - too cluttered, try taking a photo of the iron alone with a one colored & non reflective background......
marctomas
02-12-2008, 12:12 AM
My idea of black and white photography is delivering a drama of timelessness or expressing the mystery of time. You could have tried an older functional flat-iron as subject instead of an steam-iron w a cord that appears to be connected w an electric tape. I can still remember flat irons using coal way back 35 yrs ago! That would come out as historical or what have you... you may also want to try maneuver the framing by adjusting the subject with the arc where the wall clock is hanging. It appears that your camera is tilted to about 10degrees to the right. Tilting a camera may give some effect but for this photo try to follow the lines of the arc. The sharpness of the subject and depth of field is good! Post some more of your pictures here. :) That's my two cents worth.
briancayanan
02-12-2008, 11:45 PM
wow! thanks for the comments! will try that in my next captures.
i guess what i like about black and white photos are the well defined details of the subject in focus and its contrast to the unfocused background. those lines really show up in black and whites.
here's another one from the same set.:
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2362/2237724185_391c61f65d.jpg
jijodeguzman
02-13-2008, 09:14 AM
Which is the subject in your 2nd photo??? Every photo has to have a subject.:)
briancayanan
02-14-2008, 12:59 AM
the subject is the person sitting and the chair. made it out of focus on purpose and instead gave the foreground focus to give the feel of looking into the other side of the room. as you peek, you only see a blurry scene and this somehow tickles your curiosity and invites you to come and see what's n the other side...
ok, just made that all up right now. peace!